多错的“英语写作必背200句”变成了“句型完美,经典文章,精华中的精华”

TheYeti

很多论坛上都有转载“英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句”。有些论坛更有四，五个同样的贴。有些贴是连有这个有如此惊人之序言：“这200句是我们写作教学组6年时间提举出来的国外经典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华。” 或是“这些句子是从近百篇雅思优秀作文中摘录下来并经反复推敲提炼而成的。” 或是“英语高级写作必背200句，为经典之作，不仅仅句型完美” 是真的吗？答：不是。

(网上有些说是源出新东方教材。是不是我不能肯定。我自六十年代开始年至今，一直在海外读书，教书，生活。。。所以对中国补习学校的各们各派都不了了)

引：Dendis首席版主 http://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=355001&extra=page%3D1 另外需要提醒大家的是感觉这个里面有些可能是中国人自己写的句子，因为问过一些老外说里面的句子和词的用法有的是有问题的.

引: Yeti: 试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句引: "是从稍为修改过，比较好的学生作业上抽出来的。其内仍有很多错误" (看例子 1 to 90 连接在此: http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210)

以下是从“试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句’ 一至 90” http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210 抽几个出来做例子

13 . 　 A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

修改为 A proper part-time job would not occupy too much of a student’s time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all their time on their studies. As an old saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” (Please note this same quote is repeated in #79)

26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

修改为(The information…over the last few years…less useful than what most people think.)

27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation. 改为(--> by the time they graduate.)

44. It is commonly (改为 generally) accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation (修改 graduate). (This is essentially the same as 27. My suspicion is that one is a partially corrected version from the same essay, with the second mistake missed.)

32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

修改: the rapidly economic development--> the rapid economic development; bicycle is bound to-->the bicycle is/bicycles are; that bicycle will continue--> the bicycle will/bicycles will.

#51 There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job. (**This is obviously a sentence taken from a CET4/6 essay. I have read literally dozens of this type of sentence in students essays. Besides, students taking part time jobs would not be a “phenomenon” that is generally debated on campus in western universities.)

76. It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing. 修改: ( a student …his…textbook)(students…their…textbooks) 我想我不用再多说。请各位不要被大吹大擂的标题所误道

For more, see 试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句’ 一至90” (请尊重别人的劳动成果, 拜托请注明转贴，注明作者及出处) http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210