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You should have more clear about your personal interest, and your advantage, like basketball is only the hobby, and marketing management + ProE, is the advantage. It is too simple about your internship, i.e. what is your understanding about teamwork, it it can have the real case, it will be more solid. i.e. you have help to improve the sales volume, but what it the number, and what you have done personlly. And if possible, pls. add on the topic of your graduation theme. Hope it is useful. | 
