sliverwolf 发表于 2010-6-26 20:47:47

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #006400; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312">十月看秋颜，双眸秋色满。<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #006400; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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sliverwolf 发表于 2010-6-26 20:50:05

老作品，清仓大甩卖！

爱新觉罗浦东 发表于 2010-6-28 09:57:42

<p>好作品！不过是不是lz因为是大甩卖就疏忽一些细节？个人觉得不够精炼。</p>
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<p>哈哈 不成熟的评论</p>

sliverwolf 发表于 2010-6-28 10:14:46

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>爱新觉罗浦东</i>在2010-6-28 9:57:42的发言：</b><br/>
<p>好作品！不过是不是lz因为是大甩卖就疏忽一些细节？个人觉得不够精炼。</p>
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<p>哈哈 不成熟的评论</p></div>
<p>爱新觉罗？溥东更合适吧，人在上海，所以就叫浦东，呵呵。
<p>没有机会游览祖国的大好河山，想起了故乡秋色，所以这样写的，有点怀念的感觉。现在很难看到这样的风景了，高楼大厦，车流烟尘、快男快女、伪娘人妖，还有一沓沓的钞票，这才是写实，上面写的只是记忆罢了。</p>
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