in English

songmin

Frow now on ,i will use the English to write my bk,maybe it will have many wrong places used in my bk ,but  i think i can use this practice to improve my written English. i need to have the habit to write my bk in English . Every day i will write an article. i hope i can improve the level of my written English using this way. certainly, i need my friends to support me !! you  can give me many advice about my English. sometimes i need your help. Maybe your help is very important  to me .

So,please give me  as many advice as possible.

thank you very much!!!

please support me !!!

caveman

Looks like you are rather confident on it.  Hope you have a success.
By the way, what is "bk"?  Shortform for "book" or another way to express "blog"??  I think it's better not to use too much shortform like that.
Further, beware the use of capital letter -- such as the first person designation and the first letter of word in a sentence.  This is a bad habit on typing and MUST be corrected.

kilter1

I suppose that the 'bk' what you said means 'BLOG', right?

If so, where we can find it?

风

I support you! It's a good idea.

Perfect writing need perfect words: Don't say"often/usually"but use"more often than not";don't say"important" but use"be of utmost/vital/great importance/plays an indispensable role/part in";

×more and more---∨increasing/growing    increasingly/growingly

×infact---∨as a matter of fact

×therefore---∨accordingly/as a result/consequently

×much---∨a great deal of/a large amount of/a large sum of(money)

×many---∨a great number of/quit a number of/quite a few