sunwendao 发表于 2006-4-5 21:10:40

[原创]格律词《八声甘州》

<p>黄巢哥哥的院子里还是满栽着菊花吗<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>易安姐姐不再像黄花那样消瘦了吧<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>林妹妹吟罢<font face="Times New Roman">“</font>秋风秋雨<font face="Times New Roman">”</font>后又吐血了<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>而一向风流倜傥三变弟弟又在感叹<font face="Times New Roman">“</font>是处红衰翠减，冉冉物华休<font face="Times New Roman">”,</font>都市森林里动物凶猛<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>红睛绿眼<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>白牙参差<font face="Times New Roman">/</font>蛰伏在钢筋水泥下的我们无法醉里挑灯看剑<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>更无法气吞万里如虎<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>就让我们执手相看泪眼吧<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>就让我们竟无语凝噎吧<font face="Times New Roman">,</font>我默然回首，那人不在灯火珊斓处<font face="Times New Roman">. <p></p></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>是日阿刀酒罢高歌，歌罢萧瑟，秋风乍起，对影双人。遂填词一首，修书一封，遥寄柳永，是为《八声甘州<font face="Times New Roman">.</font>和柳屯田》。 </p><p></p><p></p><p>词曰： </p><p></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman"></font>秋来也<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>梧桐细雨里<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>满地黄花瘦<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;// </font>青帝却黄巢<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>黛玉吐血<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>稼轩悲秋<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>三变奉旨填词<font face="Times New Roman"> /</font>万物皆休<font face="Times New Roman"> // </font>千古多少事<font face="Times New Roman"> / </font>江河自流 </p><p></p><p></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">//////</font>四海拔矗高楼<font face="Times New Roman"> /&nbsp;&nbsp;</font>熙熙森林闹<font face="Times New Roman"> /&nbsp;&nbsp;</font>啾啾动物愁<font face="Times New Roman"> // </font>红睛对绿眼<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>朱门酒肉<font face="Times New Roman"> // </font>无处觅，挑灯看剑<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/</font>更谁与，泪眼执手<font face="Times New Roman"> / /</font>默回首，那人不在，灯火悠悠<font face="Times New Roman">///</font></p><br/>

翘翘牙 发表于 2006-4-6 23:40:11

填得好，很费时间吧

peggy 发表于 2006-4-7 15:20:42

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>sunwendao</i>在2006-4-5 21:10:40的发言：</b> <p></p><p></p><p>四海拔矗高楼<font face="Times New Roman"> /&nbsp;&nbsp;</font>熙熙森林闹<font face="Times New Roman"> /&nbsp;&nbsp;</font>啾啾动物愁<font face="Times New Roman"> // </font>红睛对绿眼<font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp;/ </font>朱门酒肉</p></div>　　其时，莫论现代，古时亦如此，只要有人在就有各种戏目演。

ZHUHUI 发表于 2006-4-10 13:23:19

黄巢，真的是变态的儒家学子！和洪秀全一样，希望大家多关心中国历史的真实面，有助于我们理解“让历史告诉未来”这句话的深刻含义啊！
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