[原创]我的简历请大家执教评分
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="4"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt"> 简历的格式没变，请大家指教，请各位“评委”</span>指出哪里不足，哪方面很重要却漏掉表达了，满分100的话，请各位“评委”给个分，十分感谢！</font></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt">男<span lang="EN-US"> | </span>未婚<span lang="EN-US"> | 1985 </span>年<span lang="EN-US">12</span>月生<span lang="EN-US"> | </span>户口：山东青岛<span lang="EN-US"> |1</span>年工作经验<span lang="EN-US"> | </span>无党派人士<span lang="EN-US"> | 15236*****(</span>手机<span lang="EN-US">) | E-mail: <a href="mailto:sun01@126.com">sun01@126.com</a> <o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">求职意向</span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">：第一、公司很有钱，老板（领导）很有文化。第二、需要具有综合素质的工作岗位；</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">为什么求职这份工作：</span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">每个人的优势是不一样的，<span style="mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">我自身的优势和天赋可以通过<b><span style="COLOR: black">人事经理（主任）</span></b>发挥出来。</span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal">我在许多城市生活和工作过，接触过各种不同的人群，有着丰富的生活阅历和一些经验。</b></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">工作经历：</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">2008/03 -- </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">至今，*****科技有限公司（中小公司）</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> | </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">销售部</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> | </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">城市经理</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">快速消费品（食品）</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> | </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">合资</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> | </span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">规模</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">:1000-9999</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">人</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> | 2001-4000</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">元</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">/</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">月</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">工作内容，带领管理本区域内的销售团队，共</span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">60</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">人左右，完成公司的销售目标。对当地销售团队管理主要有日常例行工作的安排和监督执行，人员的招聘和培训，团队凝聚力和战斗力的加强等。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">自我（软件）分析：</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l1="l1"level1="level1"lfo1; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">1、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">有条理，有组织能力，有较强的建立合作关系的能力，能够促进和谐，尊重不同意见；</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l1="l1"level1="level1"lfo1; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">2、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">精力旺盛，热情洋溢，能很快理解他人情感的需要、动机和所忧虑的事情，因此能做到与他人高度协调；</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l1="l1"level1="level1"lfo1; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">3、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">把注意力放在帮助他人，鼓励他人进步向上。是催化剂，能引发出他人的最佳状态。性情平和，心胸宽阔，且很圆滑，很会促进周边关系的和睦，对于批评和紧张特别敏感。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l1="l1"level1="level1"lfo1; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">4、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">容易看出他人的发展潜力，并倾力帮助他人发挥潜力，是体贴的助人为乐者。你愿意组织大家参与活动，使大家和睦又感到愉快。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l1="l1"level1="level1"lfo1; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">5、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">是理想主义者，非常看重自己的价值，对自己尊重景仰的人、事业和公司都非常忠诚。有责任感、谨慎、坚持不协，同时对新观点很好奇。若能为人类的利益有所贡献，会感到深受鼓舞。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">自我（硬件）分析：</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: -36pt; MARGIN-LEFT: 36pt; mso-list: l0="l0"level1="level1"lfo2; tab-stops: list="list"36.0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list: Ignore">1、<span style="FONT: 7pt="7pt"'Times New="New"Roman'"> </span></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">183cm</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US">68kg</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"Roman'">。身体素质优秀，健康状况良好。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p> <p>求职意向的第一条 什么意思?要表达什么？</p> <p>我也是求职意见的第一条不太明白什么意思</p>
<p>在工作经历上可以多写一些实质性的内容，比如举一个例子说明工作上的成绩可能更能引起HR的注意</p> <p>我筛选简历的时候，遇到这种简历是肯定首先抛弃的。</p> <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New?><strong>求职意向中所提到的内容，一般会让领导反感</strong></span> <p>非常感谢大家给出的分析和意见！</p>
<p>真的非常感谢！</p>
<p>我会改进 的。</p> <p>大家都注意到了你的简历中第一条，“公司很有钱”——暗示你是冲着钱来的；“老板很有文化”——暗示你对领导的要求高过领导对你的要求，光这两点就让人觉得你自视很高。</p>
<p>你谈到了自身的“软件”条件，对“硬件”谈的很浅，实际上HR首先关注你的“硬件”，而“软件”因为不方便测评，只需几句话概括就行了。</p>
<p>提个小建议：不论你能力有多强，都要保持谦虚的心态。</p> <p>求职意向不明确</p> <p>1、求职意向一般指的是，你想要从事的行业和职业，你填写的这一栏情况不够明确，而且过分的强调企业的资质，没有企业会想要这样的人。</p>
<p>2、不用写为什么需要这份工作，而且你所填写的理由，带有明显的引导性（要做HRM 或者主管），个人认为在不妥当</p>
<p>3、在工作经历上，不够丰富，只知道你在干嘛，但是不知道你的成绩如何，缺乏弹性，让我联想不出来你到底干的好不好，怎么样，因此，建议你添加一些数据化的东西，比方说：任务完成率，完成量，引导培训过多少人，客户满意度，与哪些知名公司保持了良好的业务关系等等，且都应该是有据可查的最好。</p>
<p>4、建议你最后哪个什么软件硬件的评价改改，将硬件评价放到自己的最前面的个人资料里面，后面软件评价改为自我评价。</p>
<p> </p> <p>也是河南的，我是河南财经学院的 。简历很一般</p>
<p>好像你知道一些HRM知识，其实那是一些皮毛</p>
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